August 23, 2004
about the new layout
This weekend I've done what I've wanted to do for a long time -- make the switch from the basic two-by-two strip format to the more traditional four-panel format on Planet Earth (and other tourist traps). Why? I could say it's getting back to the roots of the original strip -- (the story so far...) was published in that horizontal format. Or I could look at it from a merchandising standpoint and say that it's so I can more easily collect the strips into comic book or digest book format. Or I could say that it's because I've recently been looking at Les' recent Johnny Crossbones work and Leonard's Innies and Outties and realized that I really enjoy the horizontal layout.

But those aren't the real reasons.

In the months prior, it felt less and less like I drew a comic strip and more and more like I assembled a comic strip. I wouldn't actually draw Janet and Dex sitting at the counter at the Eternal Order of Coffee, I'd draw three Janet and three Dex torsos. Scan and manipulate in Photoshop; drop in the EOC background and counter images; add the exterior shot for one of the four panels; toss on some Illustrator speech balloons. Hell, all I've drawn where the same three Janet and Dex poses I've drawn three times a week for the past three-odd years. It felt like work.

Another thing: I fear I'm stunting my artistic growth with the strip. I know my figure drawing has evolved past what you see here, but if I radically change the art style, I feel that there'd be a lack of continuity in the work. It would look as if a replacement artist had come on board. Look at the comics that have had extremely long runs, your Dick Tracy, your Garfield, your Annie -- for the most part, the artwork has stayed rather consistent throughout the life span of the comic strip. So, even though I'm continuing in my artistic development, I've decided to keep the style of PE(aott) consistent. Which means I'm reinforcing an art style that I might not particularly like nor favor.

So that leaves me with two choices -- and neither one of them is stop doing the comic strip. Choice one: I switch the strip completely over to a cut and paste comic. Choice two: I cut back on the reliance of cut-and-paste and just draw, dammit. One gets me a comic with a consistent art style that won't interfere with my developing art style as well as maximizing my time. Two gives me a sense of accomplishment when I actually create something.

It's tough, but I'm going with option two for now. Just sitting there and drawing the whole damn thing out feels a lot more honest than relying on the computer to cobble together a strip. It's good, solid cartooning. Going to a "four panels across" format just felt right. Drawing Monday's (and Wednesday's) strips in that format just felt like the magic came back. I didn't assemble a strip, it didn't feel like work. I created something and dammit, it felt good.

Posted at August 23, 2004 11:30 PM



The problem with the four-panel-across format is that if you need six or eight panels to develop a strip you don't have the flexibility. Like

http://www.thesnakefarm.com/strips/planetearth.php?stripdate=040730

Speaking of flexibility, are you going to finish

http://www.thesnakefarm.com/strips/planetearth.php?stripdate=040719

Posted by: President Leechman at August 24, 2004 06:21 AM


I have thought about that, but I think I'll enjoy the challenge of the four-panel strip. If I need to, I can always double up the strips and stack one on top of another. This way, I'd have to work on the comedic timing so that something minorly humorous takes place at the end of the top row and the major funny coincides with the end of the final strip.

Now for the superhero storylines, I'd allow myself a bit more freedom with the layout. When we really got into the superheroic parts of the Herotime storyline, the layout of the strip changed from a two panels by X panels to a more freeform, comic-book style layout. If I revisit those grounds again, the layout of the comic strip might change while we're focusing on those strips.

About the unfinished strips, last weekend I was able to finish the second one (where alt.monika was introducted). I do plan on finishing up the one you linked to.

Posted by: cartoonlad at August 24, 2004 08:47 AM


I am glad to hear you are changing things up. You already have a break in artistic style from TSSF... and PE(aott) and that's okay. Web comics are especially prone to changing artistic styles, but that's a good thing. Being too static is dull and leads ultimately to The Family Circus: the same one panel, over and over and over and over and over.

Posted by: Stephen at August 24, 2004 08:33 PM


alt.monika!

Sounds like a Usenet group. Or even a hierarchy.

alt.monika.misc
alt.monika.flame
alt.monika.dex
alt.monika.diane
alt.monika.monika
alt.monika.woot.woot.woot

Posted by: President Leechman at August 25, 2004 06:56 AM